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Once again didn't win, I started drawing it after a post in /cgl/ and when I lost got some really good critique and opinions from Anon about why I lost.

Most Anonymous found my art too be too stiff, awkward and confusing to look at. Which makes total sense, she does look stiff and awkward and I can see why people are confused when they look at it. What is she doing? You tell me I just wanted to show off the sleeves but it just looks awkwaaard. And also bad color scheme, I must have the worse taste in picking colors because that is the number one thing I keep getting is I always pick colors that are too harsh.